Legends of the Jedi Forums Newbie Watering Hole Desc Writing Service
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    • Bai Member
      December 20, 2008 at 7:54 pm #905

      I was going to write descs for every race and gender.. but Johnson made me realise that 40 races times 2 genders, times 3 descs per gender.. is alot.

      SO! I’m just going to offer a description writing service!

      [u:dmer3gxx][b:dmer3gxx]Why should I use this service?[/b:dmer3gxx][/u:dmer3gxx] I love to write descriptions, and would love to assist you. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, or need someone to write you a description, I am here to help.
      [b:dmer3gxx][u:dmer3gxx]Who can use this service?[/u:dmer3gxx][/b:dmer3gxx] Anyone.
      [b:dmer3gxx][u:dmer3gxx]What can I use this service for?[/u:dmer3gxx][/b:dmer3gxx] New characters, Old character desc rewrites and disguises.
      [u:dmer3gxx][b:dmer3gxx]How can I use this service?[/b:dmer3gxx][/u:dmer3gxx] Use them as a template, or use them as they are written.
      [u:dmer3gxx][b:dmer3gxx]How long will it take to get my character description?[/b:dmer3gxx][/u:dmer3gxx] I will get to work on your description as soon as possible. With the promise of satisfaction guaranteed, it will take no less than a day to get to you.
      [b:dmer3gxx][u:dmer3gxx]Where can I get this service?[/u:dmer3gxx][/b:dmer3gxx] Contact [b:dmer3gxx]@Aegrisomnia/Permafrost[/b:dmer3gxx] through the RPC channel, PM [b:dmer3gxx]Bai[/b:dmer3gxx] on the forums, OR contact through AIM at [b:dmer3gxx]lotjb41[/b:dmer3gxx]

      My descriptions can be generic or in-depth, long or short. And the best part is? It’s [b:dmer3gxx]free[/b:dmer3gxx]!

      [b:dmer3gxx]Examples of my past descriptions are like so:[/b:dmer3gxx]


      Wroonian female

      Before you is what seems to be a female human. She has medium length midnight black hair that reaches to about her jaw in the front, and from there, is cut into a bob fashion towards the back. The back of her head looks like it was neatly shaved at one point but has started growing back since. From beneath her long bangs, one can see her eyes of pale yellow peering out.

      She has a nice body with slender arms and legs. Full, pouty dark blue lips are found below her small, button nose. Over all, the woman’s dark blue skin looks soft and unmarred, but her hands, elbows and knees are scarred and beat up.

      Beneath her almond shaped eyes, tattooes of some kind can be found. They look like black tears made from running mascara. There are three under her right eye. Under her bottom lip, a thick black line was made, with empty circles running down the sides in half-inch increments.

      Through her bottom lip, one can see a steel vertical bar with a ball on either end sticking out. The piercing itself goes perpendicular to the lip itself, as it goes vertically through the lip, not like a horizontal labret. The woman also has other piercings, two eyebrow rings on the right side. One last piercing can be found, and it goes through the bridge of her nose — right between the eyes.


      Twi’lek male

      Before you is what looks to be a Twi’lek male. Mocha skin wraps over the slighty toned figure of this male, while two lekku flow delicately from the back of his head. He has a slightly pointed nose, as well as pale, cream-colored lips that contrast his striking blue eyes. The top of his head is crowned by bone-structure that makes the top of his forehead jut out ever so slightly. He is fairly lanky, with long legs and long fingers. Ususally, the man can be seen wearing his lekku as though they were a scarf: one ‘thrown’ around his neck like fabric.


      Firrerreo female

      The young woman before you looks to be about five-foot-six-inches in height, and approximately one-hundred-and-ten pounds. Her seemingly unworked body is covered in extremely pale, golden skin. The young woman’s body is hardly curvacious, and even less muscular. No visible marring can be seen upon her body. She does, however, possess long limbs, dexterous hands, and small feet.

      The woman’s dark green eyes sparkle with innocence and a vigor for life. &rMaroon shoulder-length hair cascades towards small shoulders. Bands of dark brown can be seen here and there within the red. Dimples on her face cannot hide the fact that she smiles often, and when she smiles long, white canines can be seen.

      Every once in a while, her green eyes seem to blink sideways with a thin, translucent lid.


      Togruta male

      Before you is what looks to be a tall, red-skinned Togruta male. White and black striped, curved montrals rise from the top of his head as a pair of darker-and thicker-striped headtails frame a long face set with a penetrating eye with a dark iris and thin, pale red lips. This Togruta male seems to be missing an eye. He has a slender, but ever-so-slightly crooked nose. The form of this male is quite thin, and his shoulders quite broad. He has muscles that are finely toned and worked, as though they had endured years of training. His body seems to have quite a few scars that are dark in color compared to his skin. This man’s face features elaborate red and white patterns. The white on his face is more of an off-white, and the shape it seems to form is that of a four pointed star: One point reaches up to where the red of his forehead reaches the white of his montrals, and two of the other three points fan out to where a human’s ears would be. Where the fourth point should be connected to the others, the off-white just stops, curving over his nose delicately to close the gap. There are places at the top point of the star that have retained their red pigment: a medium-sized circle between his brows and another smaller circle above the first.

      [b:dmer3gxx][i:dmer3gxx]The above descriptions are examples of what I can do, and I ask that they not be used for your own characters.[/i:dmer3gxx][/b:dmer3gxx]

      P.S. There is no limit yet, but one can be added as soon as people abuse it!

    • Drel Member
      January 4, 2009 at 2:06 am #8744
      "Bai":1irnl6fo wrote:

      Firrerreo female

      The young woman before you looks to be about five-foot-six-inches in height, and approximately one-hundred-and-ten pounds. Her seemingly unworked body is covered in extremely pale, golden skin. The young woman’s body is hardly curvacious, and even less muscular. No visible marring can be seen upon her body. She does, however, possess long limbs, dexterous hands, and small feet.

      The woman’s dark green eyes sparkle with innocence and a vigor for life. [b:1irnl6fo]&rMaroon shoulder-length hair cascades towards small shoulders.[/b:1irnl6fo] Bands of dark brown can be seen here and there within the red. Dimples on her face cannot hide the fact that she smiles often, and when she smiles long, white canines can be seen.

      Every once in a while, her green eyes seem to blink sideways with a thin, translucent lid.
      [/quote:1irnl6fo]
      Color fail.

    • Ranman Participant
      January 5, 2009 at 12:55 am #8755

      I always thought colours in a description just…blargh.

      Also, it’s a nice thought, but in my opinion undermines the whole purpose. This encourages copy paste, not imagination, thought, or someone preparing themselves for roleplay.

    • Drel Member
      January 5, 2009 at 4:22 am #8759
      "Ranmyaku":conmbzsv wrote:
      I always thought colours in a description just…blargh.

      Also, it’s a nice thought, but in my opinion undermines the whole purpose. This encourages copy paste, not imagination, thought, or someone preparing themselves for roleplay.[/quote:conmbzsv]
      [img:conmbzsv]http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com/images/6/6e/Copy-Pasta.jpg[/img:conmbzsv]

    • Bai Member
      January 6, 2009 at 10:51 pm #8781

      I’m not going to appologize for helping. <!– s:) –><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!– s:) –>

      People so far have had me help them re-write current descs. A good success.

    • Quicksilver Participant
      January 13, 2009 at 12:48 am #8831

      I like it. Infact, wanna help me write a few descs when I get back Bai?

    • Ranman Participant
      January 13, 2009 at 8:54 am #8833
      &quot;Quicksilver&quot;:16eq2ysv wrote:
      I like it. Infact, wanna help me write a few descs when I get back Bai?[/quote:16eq2ysv]

      That’s because you’re both lazy and lonely, Silver.

      If people don’t write their own descs, soon, they won’t write their own histories. Then character sheets. Soon enough, you’ll have lazy players getting their entire character designed by other people.

    • Quicksilver Participant
      January 13, 2009 at 8:56 pm #8837

      You know that I’m neither of those, Ran. You also know that I put a lot of work into things I get excited about. This is an opportunity to bounce ideas off of someone else, compare and contrast writing styles, and maybe even improve my own. It just takes being willing to socialize with other people. You remember socializing for it’s own sake, right?

    • Bai Member
      January 14, 2009 at 7:07 am #8842
      &quot;Quicksilver&quot;:2bgy7p7t wrote:
      This is an opportunity to bounce ideas off of someone else, compare and contrast writing styles, and maybe even improve my own. [/quote:2bgy7p7t]

      Exactly.

      And yes, of course I will help you. <!– s:) –><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!– s:) –>

    • Trayn Participant
      January 4, 2010 at 3:03 am #13004

      Can you make me a Hutt desc please? yellow color, with a scar over his right eye.

    • Inactive
      January 4, 2010 at 4:32 am #13003

      A hutt is here. He is fat. He is yellow and kind of disgusting looking and has a slimy ass.

      Also, there’s a tiny scar above his right eye, probably from where he hit himself trying to open a bottle of Slug Soda.

    • Trayn Participant
      September 16, 2012 at 10:28 pm #19875

      Can you make a wookiee description?

    • Oteri Participant
      September 17, 2012 at 10:34 pm #19879

      There’s a wookie here. He’s kind of fat and stinky. His fur is matted and mangy. He foams slightly at the mouth, and most of his teeth are yellowed and blackened, rotting from the gums. He smells like mayo after it’s sat in the sun for several days.

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